Monday, 31 January 2011

Evaluation

Notice me is about a distraught bear who belongs to a tear away teenager, once upon a time "Harry"
Bear and Liam were best friends and done everything together now Harry has been pushed aside for Liam is no experiencing with teenage lifestyle and doesn't want to be associated with cuddly toys.
The film follows the story of Harry who wants Liam to understand how he feels and explains everything he's been through. The film is a light hearted comedy with serious elements underlining some issues of loneliness and rejection, it also explores the life of a teenage boy through the eyes of someone else.


How does the final version of your short film differ from the original idea you had and why? Synopsis, characters, location, props, costume, script. What stayed the same?

We first decided to make a film about the life of a teddy, how it feels to be in the background of someones life it was meant to reflect a light hearted comedy about a tale of best-friends a boy and his bear. However after much planning and decision to make a spilt within our group causing one member to leave we thought it would be best if we both made the same film but choose a different genre for each.
Our film depicts a sad version of a boy and his bear, the struggle to remain friends when age and social activities comes in between them. At first we wanted to show both characters because we felt it would be more beneficial for the audience to see who the teddy is talking about, but after shooting the first set of pictures without a actor because he couldn't make it we decided not using a person would add mystery to who he is and make the story a puzzle.

We initially picked a dark brown teddy bear to use in the film but after some test shots discovered that he didn't quite fit with the photographs and he was too small to make any impact on the photographs. So we searched around until we found the final teddy, we took test shots of them all and then discussed which on we believed was better. The story board we created came in very useful we used to it exactly to what it is and it helped us a lot, so there was no change in the shot list or photographs we wanted to take.
The only difficulty we had was when we got to the edit suite and realised we didn't take enough pictures they slowed us a down a lot and we started to give up and have little faith in the project, it was at this point we didn't realise how many pictures we needed to take to make a 2-5 minute film.

We decided to sit down and brainstorm what photos we still needed so we didn't waste time taking pictures we knew weren't going to use and ones that wouldn't fit around the script, in the long run this helped us when it came to finally getting back into the edit suite. 
Another problem that occurred was the props we planned to use in the film we didn't have at home or couldn't manage to get hold of this put the film on hold on quiet a while and we wasted a lot of time trying to find people who had the props or buying them ourselves, if we had actually written down what we had or knew for definite who had what we would of saved time and the rush finish the film wouldn't of been so stressful.

The voice over for teddy took some time to put together, we auditioned for the part of the bear and herd a few voices both were excellent and both brought something different to the film and we were unable to decide who was better. However in the end we picked Alex because his energy levels and his ability to add an extra sound to teddy gave the character more personality.

What was your role in the pre-production,production and post production?
In the Pre-Production I took up a more creative role of finding inspiration for the contents of the short film and to come up with a title. I searched through books and the Internet, reading children's stories involving a boy and a creature to find the balance of a friendship to portray in the film; I took up this role because I wanted to be more involved in the background and meaning of the film.
In the production I was set the job of organising the shoots calling my group to let them know where to meet and what time we were taking photographs, once the photos were taken it was my job to organise  the photographs on a laptop and put onto a USB ready to transport into the edit. In the post production I shared the editing and research into title fonts and music, I wanted to do my fair share so we made a rota and set days and times of who would do what so we could both say we tried everything and it was a joint effort.  I enjoyed the edit of the film, it was a real sense of achievement when you look at what you have done.

What would you improve and what do you like?
I love this short film, I think it's really creative and it's something unusual, to make a short film without actually filming anything was going to be a challenge from one day but we stepped up and grabbed the opportunity, it became the most enjoyable project. I love characters, we spent a lot of time researching a teddy bear and how he might act and I believe we have created "Harry" to fit all the stereotypes. I like the balance of seriousness with the contrast of it being such a comedy, I also believe the film highlights issues in today's society it brings out morals with the context of comedy.
I would of liked to improve the quality of the pictures, they look a bit simple and give the effect maybe the film was thrown together and this is a false impression! We didn't use any effects in the film like cross fading or dissolve another picture into another, we could of used this to break up the film a little.

I would like to make the same film but using a video camera and go into much more depth into the relationship the teddy doesn't have with Liam! and what he does with himself on a daily basis waiting for him to come home. 

How have the short films that you have studied/researched influenced your own production?
We watched a lot of drama short films that were full of tension and some were so dramatic and hard hitting and then to balance them out we watched cheesy short films that seemed to me to be useless?
The nitty gritty hard hitting ones were brilliant and I really enjoyed watching them but I wanted to take a story and turn it into something different, something that was unexpected. We chose the theme of rejection and loneliness and instead of making a drama that people would identify straight away and pick the genre we made it into a comedy. Out of all the films we watched what I noticed the most was the length of them, the longer ones dragged out and gave you too much information for a feature? or bored me because the story was so pointless, I used this conclusion to make ours only 2 minutes51 seconds long to grab audiences hold their attention and then let them go!
From watching the short films i noticed getting the characters right was so important for the story, so that's why we researched the character for so long to get it right.

We used Youtube to research a lot of college made video's by other students about teddy bears, we found most of them were animations and involved a cute and cuddly storyline; we wanted to break away from that so we could see teddy bears in a different light.

What was your other influences?
We decided to use a teddy bear because of the phrase "your never too old for a teddy" all members of the groups were coming up to the age of 18 and we joked about becoming adults and not needing one anymore, this triggered off an idea to use in the film "how would your teddy feel".
In the preparation class's for short film we looked at secrets postcards, one was written from a boy who wanted his teddy to talk to him who used part of this idea and adapted it make it more serious. Children's programmes were also a major influence with both of us with younger siblings/nephews/cousins we have recently been watching a lot of children's TV where teddy feature a lot, we thought it would be a nice idea to hear a serious story from a teddy.
We listened to a lot of songs involving friendship and drew pictures to match the lyrics of how a teddy bear might re-act to the song this helped us to develop the character.

Who is your target audience and how have you reached them?
Initially the film was targeted at young children from the age from 10 upwards but mostly reaching out to 12 year old leaving primary school ready for secondary school, however we had to consider the content very carefully. We watched through the film and were shocked at the amount of references to sex, violence and drugs there were and we thought it would be unacceptable to show this to young children so the rating was changed to 15+.
With peer pressure among teenagers we thought the film showed how it is okay to have a teddy as well as your social life and its not a childish thing. The film highlights situations that the age group can connect with and understand.

Where would you exhibit your short film?
Social networking not only connects people together but it allows you to share your work, so first I would upload to facebook and get my friends to leave positive feedback on the film so we can understand whether other people understand it. An ideal place to take the film would be London film festival it has many opportunities to showcase unusual films, the festivals audience is very board and it accommodates a lot of school trips therefore there is a chance of our target audience being there to see it. Word of mouth at the festival is a powerful tool so the film may get some "wanted" attention.

How does the piece conform to short film codes and conventions, think both in terms of technique and content?


In terms of technique our film is spot on short film codes and conventions, the length of the film is just under 3 minutes long; on average a film is no longer than 10 minutes but no shorter than 2 minutes.
However we cannot comment on fast pace cutting on filming techniques because we did not use a video camera we used a normal slr camera in terms of short films it is unusual to find one that has no footage, I think we pushed boundaries with this film. Our film does have a beginning middle and end and it has a good story structure, the characters are simple and well introduced. It has no special effects and looks like a budget version of a full length animation, the lightening was created from ordinary everyday light sources like it would in a short film because of the tight budgets.


Monday, 29 November 2010

What's there left to do?

Unfortunately we still haven't taken enough pictures for our film, so we are using this time wisely to go out and shoot more images. We are currently having meetings to discuss when we are going to take the pictures; we still also need to make titles for our short film and finalise the title because we did have several ideas.We have found a few pieces of music that we think will suit the style of the film, however we cannot for sure pick a piece because we haven't finished yet.

Recap
-Titles
-Music
-Finish pictures.

Changes to our original idea?

The setting for our film was changed at the last minute due to weather conditions. We kept an eye on the weather forecast on the week leading up to the shoot, it was said there was to be heavy rain and thunder storms so we discussed other locations for the shoot and came up with my house for the majority of the photographs.
This meant we also had to adapt the script and story board due to the change of location, it was difficult to start with and we had to sit down and properly think about how would re-write, we wanted to be creative so we brainstormed ideas about props to use in the background for the opening scene.

We came up with everyday props like
-Tissues
-Remote control
-Cushion
We used this because we wanted a natural approach and we found this added comical effect.

Thursday, 18 November 2010

Presentation: Notice Me










Edit- Week Three

We wanted to record our voice over first before we added more pictures so were knew how much space we had to contend with. Our teacher suggested auditioning more than one person for the voice over so we had variety of voices and then we could chose.
We spent the first lesson of this week getting a camera out and finding a room to hold our voice over auditions, Our first person was Sam Ab his voice was an excellent "teddy bear voice" it was mature and fitted the style of the bear we was using for the film, we spent the whole lesson going through the script; highlighting sections we wanted him to say differently.

The second lesson we uploaded the voiceover from the day before, we listened and edited sections before we held our second set of auditions for the voiceover. We chose Alex for my second voice, he had a lot of enthusiasm and gave a dramatic edge to the voice of teddy, we uploaded it and edited sections.

After listening to both it was a hard decision but we chose Alex for the teddy.

Edit - Week Two

We wanted a second opinion on the photographs we had already taken and if the style of the film was acceptable due some sexual references. We was told that the photographs appears too quickly and the pace was far too fast and the audience weren't able to focus and follow the story. So we changed this and slowed the pace down because we also had to think about how the voice over would fit into the rhythm of the film. 


Edit - Week one.

When we uploaded our photographs we soon discovered we had no where near as much as we needed.
All together we took 360 photos, most of them we had to get rid of because of how they looked once they were uploaded. As we put them on the time line we had a shock that the whole film only came to 30 seconds. This meant we would need go out again and take more pictures and re-plan our film to bulk out what we already had. However we decided to do what we could with what we had and properly plan days to go out and take pictures.

On the thursday we decided to choose music for our film to save time at the end, we searched through soundtrack pro and found some tracks that would be suitable for the film. We had to think about the pace of the film and how in certain parts its "touching", we needed music that would emphasis this.

The Shoot - Day 3

This was our final day of the shoot, We had spoken on social networking site and discussed we wanted to take night-time shots so I arranged to take pictures separately and we would look at them the next day and discuss whether or not they would work for the film.
I used dim lightening and was given natural shadows by the darkness to create our "wifey" sexy photo-shoot, this in the long run saved us time because we wasted a lot of time the day before "creatively" planning. We spent the rest of the day perfecting our stop frame animation to make our photographs flow.

The Shoot - Day 2

I fully charged the camera up for the shoot today to save the problems from Day 1, We filmed the second half of the script however we encountered some problems with creativity, finding props for the party seen and “teddy being beaten up” caused us to stop for an hour to think about how we would film this. If we had thought about it before hand we could of properly story boarded this and brain stormed ideas about what props we had available. We also had problems trying to make smoke appear effective on pictures, we spent a long time blowing smoke onto the camera we wasted a lot of money on cigarettes we would of tested this method before the shot.  Our pictures did not come out effective so we had to cut certain shots out of the film, this was a disappointment because we had planned for this, so we spent a lot more time thinking of how to fill the gap.

Thursday, 11 November 2010

Story Boards




The Shoot- Day 1

We arranged to meet at 10-am due to bus times we was 10 minutes late but this didn't hold up our schedule because we allowed time for lateness. We had slight problems with our camera before we left, We weren't able to take out a SLR camera so we had to do with a compact camera so we decided to use Katie Louise's personal camera because it had higher mega pixels.

All the photos used for the films were taken in my house, we used this location because it looked urban and   was convenient for the equipment. However we did have difficulty with the lightening because of the position of the my flat, it is shadowed with the flats above so it was hard for us to take pictures without the sun going in and out. We decided to do a bit each other spitting up the story board into 3 days, we had to take into account charging up the camera because the battery seemed to go quickly.

We overcame the lighting by attaching torches and small lamps to clothes hangers above the teddy by doing this also created shadows which gave our images depth. We found it really useful completing our story board CORRECTLY before going to shoot because we didn't get stuck and mess around not knowing what we was doing, we looked the story board for help

Tuesday, 12 October 2010

Script


Teddy Script:

Teddy is sitting on a bench, with a small lunchbox next to him and a blackberry in his hand, focus on the facebook update: Teddy is on the bench alone again. The teddy then has a sandwich in his hand ready to eat it.
Harry:          Hmm that was nice sandwich, cheese and pickle (nom nom nom – sandwich disappear which the nosie is being herd)
I don’t really feel like going home, life isn’t what it used to be. Liam; my best friend, well he always was, I suppose now he just see’s me as Harry the teddy that gets in the way. It wasn’t always like this mind you; I’ve been there for Liam when he’s needed me.
(Cuts to the scene of the Harry and the Sex scene)
Harry:  Sophie was his first love; He would talk to me about his feelings for her and how he longed to have her, unfortunely I misunderstood what he meant
(Noises banging)
Harry: He clearly didn’t know what he was doing or how to treat a real lady but near the less I had to sit through it ‘ HUFFFF’ even covering my eyes weren’t enough
(Condom falls on his head)
Harry: Its not easy being a teddy
(Head falls down as if in shame)
Harry: I knew things were getting bad when he took me to a party, it wasn’t like previous ones I’ve been to where the girls and boys played pass the parcel and musical chairs, it was very dark and the girls and boys were dancing strangely together. I tried a sip of beer but it made me feel terribly sick
  (Show a puddle of sick next to him)
 My head was spinning, there was only one thing I remember though and that is a couple of Liam’s friends stole my blackberry now how will I update my twitter and facebook?
(Tear rolls down his face)
Harry: Harry loved to experiment with different things, I remember when he made a peanut butter and ham sandwich or when he washed his hair with fairy liquid but this time he wanted to experiment with something a little stronger
(Smoke gets blown in teddy’s face & his paw covers his mouth)
Harry: the smell was unbearable and it gave me a little cough but Liam loved it so I had to put up with it, I hoped it was a phase but it wasn’t
(Teddy drops his head and lays on the floor)



Harry: Liam seemed to have a lot of friends, he enjoyed his “hobbies” however I certainly didn’t and I couldn’t wait for Liam to grow up so we could get involved in mature activities but deep down I knew this was never going to happen
(Teddy looking at a picture of him and Liam) 
Harry: But luck would have it my small prayer was answered, Liam wanted us to go on a trip to “Sophie’s” again her mother had gone away for the weekend and she was “lonely” so goodness knows why we had to go around
(Teddy in the rucksack half hanging out)
Harry: and then I saw her, she was beautiful, I’d only ever seen something that beautiful when Liam brought a home grown rose from nursery class, her paws looked so soft, her fur so sleek
(Close up of female teddy lying on the bed with sunglasses on doing a SEXY POSE)
Harry: Now here is a woman I would like to spend a little time with, but how to start
Hi I’m teddy, yes that’s right teddy bear ;) no no maybe I should try where have you been all my life? Nope that’s cheesy okay relax
(Teddy lies next to Female Teddy)
Harry: But I didn’t use any cheesy lines, I just planted a single kiss on her lips and she was mine
(Teddy kisses Teddy)
Harry: This meant it was goodbye Liam and hello Wifey! 

Picture of Liam For photoframe

Prop List


3 – Desk lamps
1 – Cardboard box
Glow sticks
Empty beer bottle
1 - Rack sack
1 – Condom
Blackberry mobile phone

Teddy Bear 
Female Teddy Bear

Small lunchbox
Half a cheese sandwich 
scramble eggs/sweet corn/baked beans - to make SICK



Short Film Mood Board

Friday, 8 October 2010

Great Classical Music Composers Pt. 1

Most Romantic Music Ever ~ First Love - Utada Hikaru (Piano Instrumental)

Title Ideas

Synopsis

A lonely teddy bear named Harry has to watch firsthand, as his owner Liam grows up and embraces teenage life. He is exposed to youth culture today such as partying, drinking and smoking. Harry finds himself in many unfortunate situations such as being robbed, being ill and feeling unwanted.


After witnessing and experiencing several alien activities, Harry learns to accept that he no longer fits in and Liam doesn’t need him anymore. It is his time to seek a companion of his own.

A tale of loniless told through the perspective of our greatest childhood companions.

Noose-ance Bear [Short Film]